User talk:Yash Gaurkar

Hello Yash,

Thanks for your contributions. Please use a "wiki" style of writing and specifically please write from a neutral point of view and avoid value judgments. For you wrote

Back to Back gold for LBS Hall in the session 2015-16 and 2014-15. The autonomous bicycle, is that amazing that it was been published by the media as well as the some news article were also published. The students of LBS Hall work with that enthusiasm in HM(hardware modeling) not just for Hall but also for their self learning.

Instead you should write something like

LBS Hall won gold in both 2015-16 and 2014-15. Their autonomous bicycle was also covered by XYZ.

You only have to tell what happened and allow the readers to judge for themselves. Also the last sentence about enthusiasm of students is a personal opinion which you should avoid while writing a wiki article. -- Hargup (talk) 12:14, 9 April 2016 (IST)